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I've just seen a brilliant programme about dolphins on television. Which programmes have you enjoyed recently? How much television do you watch ?

I've just seen a brilliant programme about dolphins on television. Which programmes have you enjoyed recently? How much television do you watch? MlXAo
Hi DanThanks for your letter. It's delighted to hear from you. The program you have seen sounds fascinating. You asked me about what I like to enjoy on television recently. Well, I have taken in the reality contest named Teen School. That revolved around a debate in family relationships. That was such a wonderful program. I acquire a lot of knowledge about family's problems and how to solve them. Anyway, I don't spend so much time watching TV as I have many assignments. So, I occasionally enjoy what program I like at the fixed time, mostly twice a week. I have to go out now. Write me soon and don't forget to tell me about your weekend. Love Nghi
Hi
DanThanks
for your letter. It's delighted to hear from you. The program you have
seen
sounds fascinating. You asked me about what I like to enjoy on television recently. Well, I have taken in the reality contest named Teen School. That revolved around a debate in family relationships. That was such a wonderful program. I acquire
a lot of
knowledge about family's problems and how to solve them. Anyway, I don't spend
so
much time watching TV as I have
many
assignments.
So
, I
occasionally
enjoy what program I like at the
fixed
time,
mostly
twice a week. I
have to
go out
now
. Write me
soon
and don't forget to
tell
me about your weekend.
Love
Nghi
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IELTS letter I've just seen a brilliant programme about dolphins on television. Which programmes have you enjoyed recently? How much television do you watch?

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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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