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You invite a person to the seminar

You invite a person to the seminar n6W5n
Dear Sir or Madam. We would be honoured if you could come to our seminar. This seminar will be organized by the Head of universty of the world of languages. it will be very useful for teachers and students for our university. A lunch has arranged between seminar to make it more enjoyable. You are the most hihgly trained person among all universities so we want to you will do presentation at our seminar. This presentation should be about learning languages and its benefits. It will be held on 20th of May, wednesday at 8: 00 a. m. We sincerely hope that you will be able to confirm your attendance at this invitation until 16th of may in order to we will prepare place for all paticipants. We look forwrd to your presence on the seminarYours sincerely Sara Brown
Dear Sir or Madam. We would be
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honoured
if you could
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come
to our
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seminar
. This
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seminar
will
be organized
by the Head of
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universty
of the world of languages.
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it
will be
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very
useful for teachers and students for our university. A lunch has arranged between
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seminar
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it more enjoyable. You are the most
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hihgly
trained person among all universities
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so
we want to you will do presentation at our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seminar
. This presentation should be about learning languages and its benefits. It will
be held
on 20th of May,
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wednesday
at 8: 00 a. m. We
sincerely
hope that you will be able to confirm your attendance at this invitation until 16th of may in order to we will prepare place for all
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paticipants
. We look
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forwrd
to your presence on the
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seminarYours
sincerely
Sara
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Brown
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IELTS letter You invite a person to the seminar

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
138 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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