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An international conference to be held at the hotel where you work

An international conference to be held at the hotel where you work BJ5xa

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to explain our glad about an international conference is to be held in our hotel. I am happy to offer you our hotel services. Yesterday we knew that your delegate would come to our hotel to hold conference which was organized on the 15th of May. You know our hotel is located extremely good place where in the center. So that our hotel is worth planning such kind of meetings. In addition, our conference hall is big enough. It consist of two hundred seats. What is more, we offer you our well-decorated rooms and delicious dishes. After conference we provide your delegate with some hot coffee and some biscuits in free of charge. Besides that our hotel provides you with instant internet. You can ask any services what you want. I would be really grateful I f you pay attention my letter and inform me what kind of opportunities you want. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Mrs Jumaqulova

Dear Sir or Madam

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I would be really
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Yours faithfully


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Jumaqulova