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u shifted to another place and you want to be in touch with your work friend. write a letter to your friend: Explain about new city, Tell about your work at job, suggest ways to meet

u shifted to another place and you want to be in touch with your work friend. write a letter to your friend: Explain about new city, Tell about your work at job, suggest ways to meet kY7lN

Dear Elina, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirits. I'm writing this letter to inform you that I have got a new job in IT sector, Gurugram consequently I have been shifted here last week. I'm staying in city center proximate to my work place. It's known as a financial and technology hub as here are lots of shopping malls, IT companies, hospitals. Moreover, it's also home to India's largest medical tourism industry. Although it's very polluted because of factories. I have posted in the company as a manager, numerous workers work under me. However, I vigorously working here because of lots of pressure of staff. Moreover, I have learned immensely how to cope up with them. My birthday is coming in the next month so I would like you to come on my birthday. We shall have lots of fun and frolic. At the same time we shall be reviving the nostalgic moments that we spent together. Any ways I can't wait to see you Lots of love, Lavisha

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Elina
,

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got
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consequently
 I have been shifted
 here last week.

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companies
, hospitals. Moreover
, it's also
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Although
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very
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because
 of factories.

I have posted in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 as a manager, numerous workers work under me. However
, I vigorously
 working here This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of lots of pressure of staff. Moreover
, I have learned immensely
 how to cope up with them.

My birthday is coming in the next
 month This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I would like you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 on my birthday. We shall have lots of fun and frolic. At the same time we shall be reviving the nostalgic moments that we spent together.

Any ways I can't wait to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you

Lots of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
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Lavisha