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Write a letter to your manager about to going for holiday for enjoy honeymoon

Write a letter to your manager about to going for holiday for enjoy honeymoon VB9W7

Dear manager, I am planning to go to honeymoon vacation its around 15 days, last time after my marriage I was little busy on other things so I can't go honeymoon after my marriage so right now its a good time for this trip. I am planning to go to honeymoon it is around 15 days plan and I am going to shimla on 15 January 2021 to 31st January 2021. I need to check air ticket on travel advisory, indian air, jet airways website than after confirm my ticket and plan according this trip. I will inform to akash shah to manage my work. We are working together last 1 year ago and I will sure that he managed very well and I will also inform to him about my pending work, task than he will managed my work in good condition. Your sincerely, Varun shah

Dear manager,

I am planning to go to honeymoon vacation its around 15 days, last time after my marriage I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 busy on other things This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can't go honeymoon after my marriage This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?it'sit is
its
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 time for this trip.

I am planning to go to honeymoon it is around 15 days Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).plan, and
plan and
 I am going to Possible spelling mistake found.shim la
shimla
 on 15 January 2021 to 31st January 2021. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 air ticket on travel advisory, Possible spelling mistake found.IndianIndiaIndianaIndiansINDIA
indian
 air, jet Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "airways'" or "airway's"?airways'airway's
airways
 website than after confirm my ticket and plan according this trip.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 will inform to Possible spelling mistake found.Akashawashabashaka shAkashaArash
akash
 shah to manage my work. We are working together last 1 year ago and I will sure that he managed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well and I will also
 inform to him about my pending work, task than he will managed my work in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 condition.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
, Possible spelling mistake found.Va runArun
Varun
 shah