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Write a letter to your manager about to going for holiday for enjoy honeymoon

Write a letter to your manager about to going for holiday for enjoy honeymoon VB9W7
Dear manager, I am planning to go to honeymoon vacation its around 15 days, last time after my marriage I was little busy on other things so I can't go honeymoon after my marriage so right now its a good time for this trip. I am planning to go to honeymoon it is around 15 days plan and I am going to shimla on 15 January 2021 to 31st January 2021. I need to check air ticket on travel advisory, indian air, jet airways website than after confirm my ticket and plan according this trip. I will inform to akash shah to manage my work. We are working together last 1 year ago and I will sure that he managed very well and I will also inform to him about my pending work, task than he will managed my work in good condition. Your sincerely, Varun shah
Dear manager,

I am planning to go to honeymoon vacation its around 15 days, last time after my marriage I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
busy on other things
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so
I can't go honeymoon after my marriage
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so
right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
Did you mean "it's" (="it is") instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
its
a
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good
time for this trip.

I am planning to go to honeymoon it is around 15 days
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
plan and
I am going to
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shimla
on 15 January 2021 to 31st January 2021.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
need to
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check
air ticket on travel advisory,
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indian
air, jet
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "airways'" or "airway's"?
airways
website than after confirm my ticket and plan according this trip.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will inform to
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akash
shah to manage my work. We are working together last 1 year ago and I will sure that he managed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
well and I will
also
inform to him about my pending work, task than he will managed my work in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
condition.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Varun
shah

IELTS letter Write a letter to your manager about to going for holiday for enjoy honeymoon

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
146 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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