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Letter to editor of newspaper

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am one of the readers of your newspaper. I am writing this letter about a local restaurant which we visited recently with my family, so that people could find out about it by reading an article in your newspaper. They are not only providing delicious cuisines but also an excellent service to the customers. Let me elaborate on the food in the restaurant. It is famous for vegetable pizza. The crust of the pizza was baked perfectly and topped with capsicum, onion, tomato, olives, sauce and cheese. When I took the first bite of the pizza, it melted in the mouth and it was excellent in taste. Although it is difficult to make sauce and cheese, they made it awesome. So, it is excellent in taste compared to other restaurants. Moreover, they ar offering a 50% discount every Tuesday. Furthermore, they are providing good services to their customers and they respect all customers. To begin with, they allocated a special family room for privacy and for toddlers they are providing a high chair. Moreover, there was is a Bell in the family room to call waiters if we need anything. Finally, he cost of the food is expensive because of the billing along with the tax and service charges. Despite the cost, it is worth the visit. I look forward to receiving a prompt response from you. Yours faithfully, Shaik naziya.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am one of the readers of your newspaper. I am writing this letter about a local restaurant which we visited recently with my family,
so
that
people
could find out about it by reading an article in your newspaper. They are not
only
providing delicious cuisines
but
also
an excellent service to the customers.

Let
me elaborate on the food in the restaurant. It is
famous
for vegetable pizza. The crust of the pizza
was baked
perfectly
and topped with capsicum, onion, tomato, olives, sauce and cheese. When I took the
first
bite of the pizza, it melted in the mouth and it was excellent in taste. Although it is difficult to
make
sauce and cheese, they made it awesome.
So
, it is excellent in taste compared to other restaurants.
Moreover
, they
ar
offering a 50% discount every Tuesday.

Furthermore
, they are providing
good
services to their
customers and
they respect all customers. To
begin
with, they allocated a special family room for privacy and for toddlers they are providing a high chair.
Moreover
, there
was is
a Bell in the family room to call waiters if we need anything.
Finally
, he cost of the food is expensive
because
of the billing along with the tax and service charges. Despite the cost, it is worth the visit.

I look forward to receiving a prompt response from you. Yours
faithfully
,

Shaik
naziya
.
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IELTS letter Letter to editor of newspaper

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
236 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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