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Question -Your friend is something to learning about arrive they want some advice from you ?

Question -Your friend is something to learning about arrive they want some advice from you? 6x8R3
Dear Shivam, I am glad to know that you have decided to learn Driving. I am glad to give you guidance regarding driving, getting a driving license no doubt have a ownanadvantage, you can't depend on transportation, when you have license you drive by own. I would recommend you to go driving school to learn drivingto driveI’ll suggest 'Aster driving school' it's government authorisedallowed driving school. all the instructer are Qualified and experience they guide you in all aspect of driving and traffic rules and staff are supportive. Usually driving school havehasa programme come in monthly package and per days it's 1 hour. I suggest you take full advantage ofthis class and learn taken all details in basic. And when you familrize with driving and traffic rules you also buy a car and then enjoy driving. if you are not feel confident in one month then signup more extra hours, come with more confidence. All the best Best regards. Nitin BAND -6. 5 Give correct spacing Use correct and required adverbs
Dear
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Shivam
,

I am glad to know that you have decided to learn
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Driving
. I am glad to give you guidance regarding
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driving
, getting a
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driving
license no doubt have
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a
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ownanadvantage
, you can't depend on transportation, when you have license you drive by
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own
.

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I
would recommend you to go
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driving
school to learn
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drivingto
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driveI
’ll suggest 'Aster
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driving
school' it's
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government
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authorisedallowed
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driving
school.
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all
the
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instructer
are Qualified
and experience they guide you in all aspect of
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driving
and traffic
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rules
and staff are supportive.

Usually
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driving
school
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havehasa
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programme
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come
in monthly package and per days it's 1 hour. I suggest you take full advantage
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ofthis
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class
and learn taken all
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details
in basic. And when you
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familrize
with
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driving
and traffic
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rules
you
also
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buy
a car and then enjoy
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driving
.
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if
you are not feel confident in one month then
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signup
more extra hours,
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come
with more confidence.

All the best

Best regards.

Nitin

BAND -6. 5

Give correct spacing

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Use
correct and required adverbs

IELTS letter Question -Your friend is something to learning about arrive they want some advice from you?

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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