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organize friend's birthday party

organize friend's birthday party RNEJM

Dear sir, I am writing in response to your request for further information of my friend’s birthday party which will be organized on April, 16th, 2021 We will invite 40 people who are her classmates. There are 20 men and 20 women. I would like you to make my friend’s party as colorful and warm as possible. At the beginning of the party, we will cut the birthday cake and sing the happy birthday song. Then we will give gifts with best wishes for her. Next, I would suggest that everyone will enjoy dancing together. Regarding the foods and drinks for the party, it would be great if you could please recommend some delicious dishes which are served at your restaurant such as beefsteak, French fries and flan cakes. I hope that this informations will be of some assitance to you. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Dear sir,

I am writing in response to your request for further
 information of my friend’s birthday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 which will be organized
 on April, 16th, 2021

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people
 who are her classmates. There are 20 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 and 20 women. I would like you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 my friend’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 as colorful and warm as possible.

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party
, we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 the birthday cake and sing the happy birthday song. Then we will give gifts with best wishes for her. Next
, I would suggest that everyone will enjoy dancing together.

Regarding the foods and drinks for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
, it would be great if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 recommend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 delicious dishes which are served
 at your restaurant such as beefsteak, French fries and flan cakes.

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this
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informations
 will be of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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assitance
 to you. I am looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. 