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you heard that your friend is going to have a travel. write a letter and introduce your country to your friend

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Hi Monica, How's it going? I hope you are well. I am writing this letter to let you know that I’ve got your response letter. I am really excited about your interesting news. So you are gonna have a summer break for two weeks, right? You must be very enthusiastic about your long-haul vacation. …. Well, Why don’t you come to Vietnam? I am too eager to see you and I would be very happy to be your tour guide when you come to my country. As you know, Vietnam is well known for breathtaking landscapes, yummy food, and so on. The fascinating thing is, we can head up to Nguyen Hue Street in Sai Gon to enjoy the hectic atmosphere with the crows of awesome people. You are able to do crazy things without fearing of judgment. What’s more, If you have plenty of time, we can travel to Phanxipang Mount in Sapa. The view is really cool, and the weather is quite cold as well. We can dress up beautiful winter clothes to take photos, and post on Facebook. What an amazing thing! So, that is all my suggestions, I’d better end now. Don’t forget to write soon and tell me all your thoughts, buddy. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Lots of love, Khánh
Hi Monica,

How's it going? I hope you are
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well
. I am writing this letter to
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let
you know that I’ve
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got
your response letter.
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am
really
excited about your interesting news.
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So
you are
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gonna
have a summer break for two weeks, right? You
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must
be
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very
enthusiastic about your long-haul vacation.
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…. Well
, Why don’t you
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come
to Vietnam? I am too eager to
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see
you and I would be
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very
happy to be your tour guide when you
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come
to my country. As you know, Vietnam is
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well
known for breathtaking landscapes, yummy food, and
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so
on.

The fascinating thing is, we can head up to Nguyen Hue Street in
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Sai
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Gon
to enjoy the hectic atmosphere with the crows of awesome
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people
. You are able to do crazy things without fearing of judgment. What’s more, If you have
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plenty
of time, we can travel to
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Phanxipang
Mount in
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Sapa
. The view is
really
cool, and the weather is quite
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cold
as
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well
. We can dress up
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beautiful
winter clothes to take photos, and post on Facebook. What an amazing thing!

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So
,
that is
all my suggestions, I’d better
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end
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now
. Don’t forget to write
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soon
and
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tell
me all your thoughts, buddy. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Lots of
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,

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Khánh
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IELTS letter you heard that your friend is going to have a travel. write a letter and introduce your country to your friend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
218 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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