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write a letter to your friend who got a bad result on English exam and give him some advice

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Dear John, Hi! How's it going? I was sorry to hear that you got a bad result on your English exam. Maybe, I'm not a genius, but I hope these tips could help you better in your learning. Have you thought about doing the reading test? This will help you broaden your vocabulary and improve your grammar. Don't focus on how many tests you have done. Remember quality is more important than quantity. You should give yourself some rest if you find it stressful. Then you will concentrate on your lessons effectively. It's better that you can do the things you like without forcing. Why don't you listen and repeat the English videos on youtube? For the first turn, you might not comprehend the content, but things will change with time. That way, little by little, you can get used to their accents and intonation. I hope that my advice could be useful. Write back soon. Love
Dear John,

Hi! How's it going? I was sorry to hear that you
got
a
bad
result on your English exam. Maybe, I'm not a genius,
but
I hope these tips could
help
you better in your learning.

Have you
thought
about doing the reading
test
? This will
help
you broaden your vocabulary and
improve
your grammar. Don't focus on how
many
tests
you have done. Remember quality is more
important
than quantity.

You should give yourself
some
rest if you find it stressful. Then you will concentrate on your lessons
effectively
. It's better that you can do the things you like without forcing.

Why don't you listen and repeat the English videos on
youtube
? For the
first
turn, you might not comprehend the content,
but
things will
change
with time. That way,
little
by
little
, you can
get
used
to their accents and intonation.

I hope that my advice could be useful. Write back
soon
.

Love
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IELTS letter write a letter to your friend who got a bad result on English exam and give him some advice

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
156 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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