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write a letter complain about the school which is nearby your house

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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about some of the problems from your secondary school which impacts my daily life recently. Lately, I have been disturbed by noisy children. I find it difficult to concentrate on working while your students still shout. Furthermore, the music, which is streamed on students' break, is too loud. In addition, littering is unacceptable. Although I warned them several times, there was carelessness from them. The children yet discard their trash into my garden. I would much appreciate it if your school could tell the kids about do's and don't's such as protecting the environment, rules of behaviors in daily life. I hope that this can be remedied soon. I look forward to receiving a reply and resolution to my problem. Yours faithfully, Tran Yen Nhi

Dear Sir,

I am writing to complain about If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 problems from your secondary school which impacts my daily life recently.

Lately, I have been disturbed
 by noisy children. I find it difficult to concentrate on working while your students still
 shout. Furthermore
, the music, which is streamed
 on students' break, is too loud. In addition
, littering is unacceptable. Although I warned them several times, there was carelessness from them. The children yet
 discard their trash into my garden.

I would much appreciate it if your school could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 the kids about Do not use 's with a verb. Did you mean "does"?does
do's
 and don't's such as protecting the environment, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 of behaviors in daily life.

I hope that this can be remedied
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to receiving a reply and resolution to my problem.

Yours faithfully
,

Tran Yen Possible spelling mistake found.NHSHiPhiNHLAHIBHI
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