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Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service.They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you

Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you QKArx
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know about the inconveniences caused due to change in route for the bus number 24b. Since, last five years I am travelling in bus no. 24b to reach the office on queen Street. I never had any issues regarding bus service as it's always on time and driver of the bus so polite and gentlemen. But, route for queen Street is recently been changed which takes longer time as compared to previous route. Moreover, not only me few other regular travellers like me are also disturbed due to this change to the bus service. On behalf of everyone I request you to consider our request to use previous route for queen Street, as it's waste of time for us. To summarise, recent change of new route for bus no 24b for queen Street is causing inconveniences to me and many other regular travellers as it's taking longer time so request you to consider the previous route. Yours faithfully, R Shah
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to
let
you know about the inconveniences caused due to
change
in
route
for the bus number 24b.

Since
, last five years I am travelling in bus no. 24b to reach the office on
queen
Street
. I never had any issues regarding bus service as it's always on
time
and driver of the bus
so
polite and gentlemen.
But
,
route
for
queen
Street
is recently been
changed
which takes longer
time
as compared to previous route.

Moreover
, not
only
me few other regular
travellers
like me are
also
disturbed due to this
change
to the bus service. On behalf of everyone I request you to consider our request to
use
previous
route
for
queen
Street
, as it's waste of
time
for us.

To
summarise
, recent
change
of new
route
for bus no 24b for
queen
Street
is causing inconveniences to me and
many
other regular
travellers
as it's taking longer
time
so
request you to consider the previous route.

Yours
faithfully
, R Shah
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the manager of your local bus service. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconveniences for you

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
169 words
6.0
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