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Complain letter about shoes

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Dear Sir I’m writing to copmlain about shoes which I have recently bought from yours shop. After one hour I saw some defects on new shoes. On the 21st of March I visited one of your local shops in order to buy a new shoes. Looking around the shop I encounter expected shoes and I asked shop assistant about it. After getting all information I decided to purchase it. After an hour I realized some defects new shoes. Shoes it seemed to me old and used before I bought it. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon as soon as possible and to receiving new shoes. Please give this matter your immediate attention. Yours faithfully Mr Navruz Abdunabiev

Dear Sir

I’m writing to Possible spelling mistake found.complain
copmlain
 about You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsneakerpumpcleattennis shoeslipperloafer
shoes
 which I have recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from yours You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 one hour I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 defects on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 shoes.

On the 21st of March I visited one of your local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shops
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "shoe"?shoe
shoes
. Looking around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 I encounter This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsneakerpumpcleattennis shoeslipperloafer
shoes
 and I asked You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 assistant about it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 getting all information I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 it. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 an hour I realized This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 defects You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsneakerpumpcleattennis shoeslipperloafer
shoes
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsneakerpumpcleattennis shoeslipperloafer
Shoes
 it seemed to me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 it.

I’m looking forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible and to receiving You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsneakerpumpcleattennis shoeslipperloafer
shoes
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 give this matter your immediate attention.

Yours faithfully


Mr Possible spelling mistake found.Nauru
Navruz
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Abdunabiev