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You are moving out of your accommodation and think that it might suit a colleague who is arriving next month.

You are moving out of your accommodation and think that it might suit a colleague who is arriving next month. 0wrQ5
Dear Mr. John, I am writing this letter to inform you, I am moving out of my accommodation. I know you are looking for accommodation, I think this will suits you. I got selected in Microsoft as lead designer, 20th April will be my joining date. I have just 2 weeks to report. There are lot of works to do and I am rushing to complete. I live in a four story building, my flat is on 4th floor, all windows are facing east. So, nature light will spread all over the place, blue painted wall which create calm and peaceful mood. A large garden full of orshid flower will be a outside view from that window. I know you are a reader, natural lighting will help you to read more comfortably. It is on the top floor, so you hear less noise from near highway which help to have a quiet place. Its located in city center, so all essential need you will get in walkable distance. I am looking forward to get reply from you. Yours sincerely, Zack
Dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter to inform you, I am moving out of my accommodation. I know you are looking for accommodation, I
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think
this will suits you.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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got
selected in Microsoft as lead designer, 20th April will be my joining date.
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I
have
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just
2 weeks to report. There are
It seems that an article is missing.
lot of
works to
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do and
I am rushing to complete. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a
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four story
building, my flat is on 4th floor, all windows are facing east.
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So
, nature light will spread all over the place, blue painted wall which create calm and peaceful mood. A large garden full of
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orshid
flower will be
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a
outside view from that window.

I know you are a reader, natural lighting will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you to read more
comfortably
. It is on the top floor,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you hear less noise from near highway which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to have a quiet place. Its located in city center,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
all essential need you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
in walkable distance.

I am looking forward to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
reply from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Zack
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IELTS letter You are moving out of your accommodation and think that it might suit a colleague who is arriving next month.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
179 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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