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You are going on a short courese to training abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before.

You are going on a short courese to training abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before. 8gL0r
Dear accommodation office, I am writing because I am a new student of the Physics Principles course in this summer and I want to give some information about me and receive some orientation about the campus. My course is the Physics Principles with Professor Daniel Hopkins, this course is a short course during the summer for physic students. The classes stars on August 2nd and I pretend to arrive there a week before, at July 25th. The course will end on August 16th and I will departure on the next day, August 17th. I would like to ask for an in-suit room with a workstation, for the reason that I will have more privacy and also feel more comfortable, giving me better results on my study. If it is possible, could you please send me some information about the public transportation to better access the college. I am looking forward for your reply. Best regards, Vinicius Curalov
Dear accommodation office,

I am writing
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I am a new student of the Physics Principles
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course
in this summer and I want to give
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some
information about me and receive
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some
orientation about the campus.

My
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course
is the Physics Principles with Professor Daniel Hopkins, this
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course
is a short
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course
during the summer for physic students. The classes
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on August 2nd and I pretend to arrive there a week
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before
, at July 25th. The
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course
will
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end
on August 16th and I
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will departure
on the
next
day, August 17th.

I would like to
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ask for
an in-suit room with a workstation, for the reason that I will have more privacy and
also
feel more comfortable, giving me better results on my study.

If it is possible, could you
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please
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send
me
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some
information about the public transportation to better access the college.

I am looking forward for your reply.

Best regards,

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IELTS letter You are going on a short courese to training abroad. It is a college that you have not been to before.

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156 words
6.0
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