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you have won 2 concert tickets. invite your friend for the concert

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Dearest John, I hope everything is good at your end. It has been a few months since we met for the mid-year vacation. I've been waiting to escape from the hectic work schedule from last month, however, I remember you have written the same in your letter. I'm glad to inform you that the right time is around the corner to have some fun. The good news is, I got 2 tickets for a popular north Indian classical concert by Sabreesh, who is the playback singer of your favorite hit song "Melebe yaar". It is held on the Event Breeze auditorium which is located in the 2nd cross street, Norris on the 21st of March 2020 - a Saturday at 3 p. m. We are the radio partners for the show, therefore I got 2 complimentary tickets by the organizing committee. Our event coordination team will be providing immense support for the stars who will be performing on the day. From the moment I received the tickets, I'm overjoyed to inform you about the musical in my very next writing to you. I would be extremely delighted if you could accompany me this time too. The first person who came to my mind is you since I remember the jazz night we attended last time, which was the memorable event so far in the year. I hope this would be a great catch-up again if you could make it this time too. Awaiting for the good news soon from you. With best wishes, Nicholas

Dearest John,

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With best wishes,

Nicholas