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You have recently moved to a new place and haven’t got a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend,  Where and why you move from there  Compare your new place to old  Where do u live now

You have recently moved to a new place and haven’t got a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend,  Where and why you move from there  Compare your new place to old  Where do u live now qV0MD
Hi Sara, How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Although it’s such a short time since we met, it seems longer. You would be happy to hear that finally, I left my old house, and relocated to Hamburg. I wanted to tell you earlier, but I was extremely busy in shifting the luggage that it got slipped out of my mind. The worst living conditions of Barcelona including no nearby shopping markets as well severe sewerage issues compelled me to leave that city. The Hamburg has least expensive living style comparatively to Barcelona. This new city has grand Shopping Malls with all international brands, mesmerizing lake views, remarkable landscapes, and primarily, lots of traditional style restaurants. In short, Hamburg is a dreamy area to live for years. My complete address is Deans Apartment, Flat No. 20, opposite to canny road. It would be amazing, if you visit me on coming weekend. We will recall all memories of university and hostel, when we were living together. I’m eagerly waiting to see you. Love, Zainab
Hi Sara,

How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Although it’s such a short time since we met, it seems longer.

You would be happy to hear that
finally
, I
left
my
old
house
, and relocated to Hamburg. I wanted to
tell
you earlier,
but
I was
extremely
busy in shifting the luggage that it
got
slipped out of my mind. The worst living conditions of Barcelona including no nearby shopping markets
as well
severe sewerage issues compelled me to
leave
that city.

The Hamburg has
least
expensive living style
comparatively
to Barcelona. This new city has grand Shopping Malls with all international brands, mesmerizing lake views, remarkable landscapes, and
primarily
, lots of traditional style restaurants. In short, Hamburg is a dreamy area to
live
for years.

My complete address is Deans Apartment, Flat No. 20, opposite to canny road. It would be amazing, if you visit me on coming weekend. We will recall all memories of university and hostel, when we were living together.

I’m
eagerly
waiting to
see
you.

Love
,

Zainab
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IELTS letter You have recently moved to a new place and haven’t got a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend,  Where and why you move from there  Compare your new place to old  Where do u live now

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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