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what the reason for studying history is that history is strongly linked to people's culture. Give your own examples.

what the reason for studying history is that history is strongly linked to people's culture. Give your own examples. pRK3w
History is an important reference for each nation that provides people valuable experiences for future decisions. Although the world is changing quickly and we cannot compare present with the past but studding the past history can help us to apprehend present much more accurate. In my opinion, knowing about the past is helpful for each society. Today we have reached modern technologies that have changed the world widely. For example one of them is internet which has improved the way we communicate and share information which is not comparable with the past. Another one is Nuclear weapon that gives more power and ability to governments for fighting or winning wars, however this opportunity was not available in the past. Therefore in some cases past events are irrelevant. Being informed about past events help us to get familiar with former policies between territories and analyze today’s relations among governments. In addition It’s absolutely clear that cognizance of alliances has given us dipper perception about countries attitudes. For example if we didn’t have any information about past events it would be really hard to understand the link between World War 1 and World War 2 which is extremely vital for subsequent political decisions about our future. In summary there is no resolution to problems without understanding the past. Since there is a connection between history and culture it’s necessary for people to peruse the past history. Such information gives them a view of populace’s attitude in the past and the way governors behaved them. For example in some cases governors abused their religious beliefs by building idols and earning revenue of them. Furthermore they attracted public by lying about god or messengers because of their own benefits. On the whole practice deceit on populace by governors has along precedent. It’s obvious that by studding the past events we can improve our culture and open our eyes on what’s happening around because these experiences are lessons for us and affect our future disposition incredibly. In conclusion, although history may seem irrelevant, it explains the forces that made today's world.
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us to apprehend present much more accurate. In my opinion, knowing about the
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is helpful for each society.

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Today
we have reached modern technologies that have
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changed
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widely
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one of them is internet which has
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improved
the way we communicate and share information which is not comparable with the
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past
. Another one is Nuclear weapon that gives more power and ability to
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governments
for fighting or winning wars,
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this opportunity was not available in the
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.
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familiar with former policies between territories and analyze
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us dipper perception about countries attitudes.
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War 1 and
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War 2 which is
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vital for subsequent political decisions about our future. In summary there is no resolution to problems without understanding the past.

Since there is a
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connection between
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and culture it’s necessary for
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to peruse the
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history
. Such information gives them a view of populace’s attitude in the
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and the way governors behaved them.
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cases governors abused their religious beliefs by building idols and earning revenue of them.
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they attracted public by lying about god or messengers
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benefits.
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we can
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improve
our culture and open our eyes on what’s happening around
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these experiences are lessons for us and affect our future disposition
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, although
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the forces that made
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