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What do you think about global world? Giver your opinion.

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Dear Members of the Selection Committee; As far as I can remember, I have always been intrigued by how the flow of money, goods and services make the world go around. Dropping my coins in my penny bank and impatiently waiting to hear the clunk sound. To further fuel my interest, my father bought me a Monopoly game which had me surrounded by concepts like money, bank, mortgage, property and income for the first time. Growing up, the strategies I learned from the game have broadened my perspective about the importance of economics in our lives and awakened my passion to criticize, evaluate and analyse the economic issues around me, leading me to pursue a degree in Economics at university. At university, I attended courses relating to Econometrics in which I learned how to model, analyse and interpret several economic variables by using statistical software like Stata and EViews. Such software helped me in improving my analytical skills and enriched my skill of stochastic thinking. I feel that such statistical tools and the proficiency required to utilize them are an integral part of the modern economist’s skill set. My unending inquisitiveness to learn has led me to study International Trade and Monetary Management at Marmara University and write a master thesis on “Macroeconomic Effects of Foreign Direct Investments on Fragile Five Countries”. Alongside my intensive studies, I have successfully managed my time and created space to collaborate with my thesis supervisor Assistant Professor Erdem Turgan and write an article on the same topic. Currently, our article is being reviewed by Anadolu University Journal of Social Sciences. In my opinion, my overindulging fondness to learn is the main reason why I would like to do another degree in Economics despite the knowledge I gained during my graduate studies about International Trade. In the future, I intend to do a study on “The Relationship Between the Credibility of Monetary Policies and Macroeconomic Performance of Turkey”. The credibility of monetary policies in Turkey is seen to be a controversial topic by many experts and the public. Additionally, the number of studies analysing Turkey are either limited or outdated. With its highly qualified academic staff and the excellent reputation it enjoys in Europe and the world, I believe that joining the master program in the University of Mannheim has much more to offer to me than two years of education and a degree. The Department of Economics in the University ranks among the leading ones in Europe according to several rankings including Times Higher Education (THE). The master’s program in Economics enjoys a range of tailor – made courses that combine a qualitative and quantitative approach to assist me in embarking my academic career and equip me with the academic background that I need before pursuing a Ph. D. degree. I am certain that my background and enthusiasm qualify me as a candidate for the Economics master program. I look forward to joining your society of committed students. Yours Sincerely, Melikşah Baykal
Dear Members of the Selection Committee;

As far as I can remember, I have always
been intrigued
by how the flow of money,
goods
and services
make
the world go around. Dropping my coins in my penny bank and
impatiently
waiting to hear the clunk sound. To
further
fuel my interest, my father
bought
me a Monopoly game which had me surrounded by concepts like money, bank, mortgage, property and income for the
first
time. Growing up, the strategies I learned from the game have broadened my perspective about the importance of
economics
in our
lives
and awakened my passion to criticize, evaluate and
analyse
the
economic
issues around me, leading me to pursue a degree in
Economics
at university.

At
university
, I attended courses relating to Econometrics in which I learned how to model,
analyse
and interpret several
economic
variables by using statistical software like
Stata
and
EViews
. Such software
helped
me in improving my analytical
skills
and enriched my
skill
of stochastic thinking. I feel that such statistical tools and the proficiency required to utilize them are an integral part of the modern economist’s
skill
set.

My unending inquisitiveness to learn has led me to
study
International Trade and Monetary Management at Marmara
University
and write a
master
thesis on “Macroeconomic Effects of Foreign Direct Investments on Fragile Five Countries”. Alongside my intensive
studies
, I have
successfully
managed my time and created space to collaborate with my thesis supervisor Assistant Professor
Erdem
Turgan
and write an article on the same topic.
Currently
, our article is
being reviewed
by
Anadolu
University
Journal of Social Sciences.

In my opinion, my overindulging fondness to learn is the main reason why I would like to do another degree in
Economics
despite the knowledge I gained during my graduate
studies
about International Trade. In the future, I intend to do a
study
on “The Relationship Between the Credibility of Monetary Policies and Macroeconomic Performance of Turkey”. The credibility of monetary policies in Turkey is
seen
to be a controversial topic by
many
experts and the public.
Additionally
, the number of
studies
analysing
Turkey
are
either limited or outdated.

With its
highly
qualified academic staff and the excellent reputation it enjoys in Europe and the world, I believe that joining the
master
program in the
University
of Mannheim has much more to offer to me than two years of education and a degree. The Department of
Economics
in the
University
ranks among the leading ones in Europe according to several rankings including Times Higher Education (THE). The
master’s
program in
Economics
enjoys a range of tailor
made courses that combine a qualitative and quantitative approach to assist me in embarking my academic career and equip me with the academic background that I need
before
pursuing a
Ph. D.
degree.

I am certain that my background and enthusiasm qualify me as a candidate for the
Economics
master
program. I look forward to joining your society of committed students.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Melikşah
Baykal
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