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New Year that I deserve Do you agree or disagree?

New Year that I deserve Do you agree or disagree? NrlQy

Hi Santa As always, everyone is waiting for the new year. I think this year was good and useful for everyone and for me too. And so today is December 31st. People are not patiently waiting for the time to be 00: 00 and a new year will come, new happiness, new plans, new success in their work and so on. This day everyone wants fun, gifts and others. Like everyone else, I also want a gift from Santa, yes yes it's you from you, and I think I deserve it. You think what I’m talking about and think it’s something big and expensive. No, in fact, this is only one paper that will help me live in America and study and become the best master of my work. This is that paper yes with the inscription you won the Green Card, I would be the happiest person in the world. And say how you deserve it, there’s some reasons for this. Firstly, I have been studying English for 7 years to be a good user of English. Moreover, I'm a good student at school. Furthermore, I have been playing the Green Card with my family for 5 years now. And I think even this year we already deserve this. If you give me this, I will go to the USA, study there, earn a lot of money for wealth and healthy life in my motherland. After achieving my plans, I will comeback to Uzbekistan and I will facilitate to my country as I can with my gained skills, experience in work and other and in a case of finance too. That's all. In This New Year I wish all the best for all individuals all over the world!

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