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You have travel insurance to cove the cost of the lost item. Describe the item and how was lost and what you want from the insurance company

You have travel insurance to cove the cost of the lost item. Describe the item and how was lost and what you want from the insurance company 6lDdx
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this in connection with a hand watch I have lost during my in Dubai which is covered by the insurance agreement I had with your company. Last week I went on Safari trip with my wife and we enjoyed the weather and the activities, until I dropped my watch in the sand on my way back to the assembly point driving the beach buggy. Although we stopped for more than 30 minutes searching for it, but it was night and we could not find it. For this matter, I have sent you the watch bill indicating the price with this letter and I would like to be compensated for the total cost of the watch as stated in clause 23b of the insurance agreement that the lost items are covered. I look forward to your prompt response with high appreciation. Yours faithfully, Amr Masoud
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this in connection with a hand
watch
I have lost during my in Dubai which
is covered
by the insurance agreement I had with your
company
.

Last week I went on Safari trip with my
wife and
we enjoyed the weather and the activities, until I dropped my
watch
in the sand on my way back to the assembly point driving the beach buggy. Although we
stopped
for more than 30 minutes searching for it,
but
it was
night and
we could not find it.

For this matter, I have
sent
you the
watch
bill indicating the price with this letter and I would like to
be compensated
for the total cost of the
watch
as stated in clause 23b of the insurance agreement that the lost items
are covered
.

I look forward to your prompt response with high appreciation.

Yours
faithfully
,

Amr
Masoud
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IELTS letter You have travel insurance to cove the cost of the lost item. Describe the item and how was lost and what you want from the insurance company

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  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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