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Write a letter to the singer.in your letter say how you feel about his performance.give details of your musical activities.explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activitie. .

Write a letter to the singer. in your letter say how you feel about his performance. give details of your musical activities. explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activitie. . bQGD3
Dear Mr. Tremain, I saw your concert recently at Manchester Hall and I thought your performance was very touching and excellent. I felt deeply connected with the lyrics in your songs. I am a current music student at Oxford university and our school is having a musical performance next week. The play relates well to your latest song and I would be very greatful if you can help with me musical activities by providing a more detail insight to your lyric. Also, could you give us some tips about performing as this is our first performance. By giving an insight to your lyric, our drama and musical team a deeper connection to the song, which is what we really need. I hope I am not asking for too much. My team really looks up to you and it would mean the world if you write back. Thank You for reading this letter and I hope to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerly,
Dear Mr.
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Tremain
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I
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saw
your concert recently at Manchester Hall and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
your performance was
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very
touching and excellent. I felt
deeply
connected with the lyrics in your songs.
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I
am a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
music student at Oxford university and our school is having a musical performance
next
week. The play relates well to your latest song and I would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
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greatful
if you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
with me musical activities by providing a more detail insight to your lyric.
Also
, could you give us
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
tips about performing as this is our
first
performance. By giving an insight to your lyric, our drama and musical team a deeper connection to the song, which is what we
really
need. I hope I am not asking for too much. My team
really
looks up to you and it would mean the world if you write back.

Thank You for reading this letter and I hope to hear from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
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Sincerly
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the singer. in your letter say how you feel about his performance. give details of your musical activities. explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activitie. .

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  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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