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letter to cookery coarse giving feedback 1. what you enjoyed 2. what changed and u improved 3. what coarse next

letter to cookery coarse giving feedback 1. what you enjoyed 2. what changed and u improved 3. what coarse next XD1bN
Dear Sir or Madam, This letter is to provide a feedback on the cookery coarse I have attended in the recent time. As my cooking is more complimented now, I would like to express my feeling of appreciation for the evolution attained. Albeit the basic cookery program especially, helped with the useful tips on using cutlery and cookware which are new to me. On the other hand, I was bounded to use the instinct tips and brought to the light the simple mistakes I used to do, now are avoided. Moreover, the kitchen hacks are the best techniques which improved my skill to next level. Usually, I cook for my family on weekends so, I can clearly see the difference. I have been remarked for my dishes on the occasions. Furthermore, the new found ability is raising the expectations as the word spread among the relatives. I am confident enough to satisfy all the members with my new talent. I intend to honing my skill more into the new techniques and varieties. I found that desert-making was not addressed I would be delighted to enroll in any new coarse thus, want to collect awestruck expressions from the people. I am truly satisfied with the results and appreciate the coarse contribution. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Shambhavi
Dear Sir or Madam,

This letter is to provide a feedback on the cookery coarse I have attended in the recent time. As my cooking is more complimented
now
, I would like to express my feeling of appreciation for the evolution attained.

Albeit the basic cookery program
especially
,
helped
with the useful tips on using cutlery and cookware which are
new
to me.
On the other hand
, I
was bounded
to
use
the instinct tips and brought to the light the simple mistakes I
used
to do,
now
are avoided
.
Moreover
, the kitchen hacks are the best techniques which
improved
my
skill
to
next
level.

Usually
, I cook for my family on weekends
so
, I can
clearly
see
the difference. I have
been remarked
for my dishes on the occasions.
Furthermore
, the
new found
ability is raising the expectations as the word spread among the relatives. I am confident
enough
to satisfy all the members with my
new
talent.

I intend to
honing
my
skill
more into the
new
techniques and varieties.
I
found that desert-making was not addressed I would
be delighted
to enroll in any
new
coarse
thus
, want to collect awestruck expressions from the
people
.
I
am
truly
satisfied with the results and appreciate the coarse contribution.

I
look forward
to hear
from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Shambhavi
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IELTS letter letter to cookery coarse giving feedback 1. what you enjoyed 2. what changed and u improved 3. what coarse next

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  American English
8 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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