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letter to cookery coarse giving feedback 1. what you enjoyed 2. what changed and u improved 3. what coarse next

letter to cookery coarse giving feedback 1. what you enjoyed 2. what changed and u improved 3. what coarse next XD1bN
Dear Sir or Madam, This letter is to provide a feedback on the cookery coarse I have attended in the recent time. As my cooking is more complimented now, I would like to express my feeling of appreciation for the evolution attained. Albeit the basic cookery program especially, helped with the useful tips on using cutlery and cookware which are new to me. On the other hand, I was bounded to use the instinct tips and brought to the light the simple mistakes I used to do, now are avoided. Moreover, the kitchen hacks are the best techniques which improved my skill to next level. Usually, I cook for my family on weekends so, I can clearly see the difference. I have been remarked for my dishes on the occasions. Furthermore, the new found ability is raising the expectations as the word spread among the relatives. I am confident enough to satisfy all the members with my new talent. I intend to honing my skill more into the new techniques and varieties. I found that desert-making was not addressed I would be delighted to enroll in any new coarse thus, want to collect awestruck expressions from the people. I am truly satisfied with the results and appreciate the coarse contribution. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Shambhavi
Dear Sir or Madam,

This letter is to provide a feedback on the cookery coarse I have attended in the recent time. As my cooking is more complimented
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, I would like to express my feeling of appreciation for the evolution attained.

Albeit the basic cookery program
especially
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
with the useful tips on using cutlery and cookware which are
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
to me.
On the other hand
, I
was bounded
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
the instinct tips and brought to the light the simple mistakes I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to do,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
are avoided
.
Moreover
, the kitchen hacks are the best techniques which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
to
next
level.

Usually
, I cook for my family on weekends
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I can
clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the difference. I have
been remarked
for my dishes on the occasions.
Furthermore
, the
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
new found
ability is raising the expectations as the word spread among the relatives. I am confident
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to satisfy all the members with my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
talent.

I intend to
Did you mean "hone"?
honing
my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
more into the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
techniques and varieties.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
found that desert-making was not addressed I would
be delighted
to enroll in any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
coarse
thus
, want to collect awestruck expressions from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am
truly
satisfied with the results and appreciate the coarse contribution.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Shambhavi

IELTS letter letter to cookery coarse giving feedback 1. what you enjoyed 2. what changed and u improved 3. what coarse next

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
219 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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