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Clothes have always been an extension to individuals to express their personalities. Many people believe that it is possible to discover a lot about individual’s mentality and their culture from their way of dressing. In this essay I will discuss why I firmly agree with this statement.

Clothes have always been an extension to individuals to express their personalities. Many people believe that it is possible to discover a lot about individual’s mentality and their culture from their way of dressing. In this essay I will discuss why I firmly agree with this statement. 6lDl0
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to your advertisement in the Australian magazine about the baby sitter job for half a year. I would like to apply for this opening. Firstly, I believe this job suits my current plans since I have been planning to spend a year in Australia during my gap year. Also, it will be an excellent opportunity to save funds for my university’s tuition fees. Secondly, I think I am qualified for this type of work since I have previous experience as a baby-sitter for multiples ages when I was in high school. Furthermore, I have volunteered to be a kindergarten teacher for disabled children. Finally, Since there will be plenty of free time and holidays, I am planning to go sightseeing and backpacking around the country. Moreover, I hope to get an opportunity to be able to volunteer in any environmental project. Thanks for considering my letter and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Youssef Assad
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to your advertisement in the Australian magazine about the baby sitter job for half a year. I would like to apply for this opening.

Firstly
, I believe this job suits my
current
plans since I have been planning to spend a year in Australia during my gap year.
Also
, it will be an excellent opportunity to save funds for my university’s tuition fees.

Secondly
, I
think
I
am qualified
for this type of work since I have previous experience as a baby-sitter for multiples ages when I was in high school.
Furthermore
, I have volunteered to be a kindergarten teacher for disabled children.

Finally
, Since there will be
plenty
of free time and holidays, I am planning to go sightseeing and backpacking around the country.
Moreover
, I hope to
get
an opportunity to be able to volunteer in any environmental project.

Thanks for considering my letter and I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Youssef Assad
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IELTS letter Clothes have always been an extension to individuals to express their personalities. Many people believe that it is possible to discover a lot about individual’s mentality and their culture from their way of dressing. In this essay I will discuss why I firmly agree with this statement.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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