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claim the insurance coverage

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I am writing this letter to claim the insurance coverage for my lost wristwatch on my trip to Korea last October. I bought my wristwatch for $624. 99. It is a round-shaped Versace watch containing Sapphire Crystal, coming along with a blue leather strap band. On October 29, I attended a concert at the Seoul Olympic Stadium, wearing my wristwatch. When I left the stadium, I realized it was gone and could not find it again.

I am writing this letter to claim the insurance coverage for my lost wristwatch on my trip to Korea last October.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 my wristwatch for $624. 99. It is a round-shaped Versace This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 containing Sapphire Crystal, coming along with a blue leather strap band.

On October 29, I attended a concert at the Seoul Olympic Stadium, wearing my wristwatch. When I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 the stadium, I realized it was gone
 and could not find it again. 

IELTS letter claim the insurance coverage

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

76 words

This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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