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You have to travel from on place to another write a letter to the bus director for a Travel Permission l

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Sub: Travel permission request from Hyderabad to Hubli on 29-May-20 My name is Mayuri O Connor, 25Years old and I am a resident of Hubli, Karnataka, I hereby, wanted to bring to your kind notice that I had travelled to Hyderabad on 10-March-20 to visit my parents after a long time and unfortunately got stranded due to the lockdown in Hyderabad since then. Therefore, I am writing to make an appeal to the Karnataka state Govt to kindly consider my request of travel on the mentioned date and allow me to travel back to my husband’s house in Hubli on 29-May-20 via flight to Hubli. Details of my travel: Depart from: Hyderabad Arrival to: Belgaum Date: 29-May-20 Cell: 9845569527 I hereby, substantiate and pledge to adhere to the state guidelines of Karnataka by downloading the ArogyaSetu app and assure to take complete precautions while arriving to the airport and shall home quarantine oneself for 14days. Thanks in advance to the Karnataka Govt for the smooth facilitation ahead. Thanks & sincerest regards Yours truly, Mayuri O’ Connor
Sub: Travel permission request from Hyderabad to
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Hubli
on 29-May-20

My name is
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Mayuri
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O Connor
, 25Years
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I am a resident of
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Hubli
, Karnataka, I hereby, wanted to bring to your kind notice that I had travelled to Hyderabad on 10-March-20 to visit my parents after a long time and unfortunately
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got
stranded due to the lockdown in Hyderabad since then.

Therefore
, I am writing to
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make
an appeal to the Karnataka state Govt to kindly consider my request of travel on the mentioned date and
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allow
me to travel back to my husband’s
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house
in
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Hubli
on 29-May-20 via flight to
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Hubli
.

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Details
of my travel:

Depart from: Hyderabad

Arrival to: Belgaum

Date: 29-May-20

Cell: 9845569527

I hereby, substantiate and pledge to adhere to the state guidelines of Karnataka by downloading the
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ArogyaSetu
app and assure to take complete precautions while arriving to the airport and shall home quarantine oneself for 14days.

Thanks in advance to the Karnataka Govt for the smooth facilitation ahead.

Thanks & sincerest regards

Yours
truly
,

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Mayuri
O’ Connor
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IELTS letter You have to travel from on place to another write a letter to the bus director for a Travel Permission l

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175 words
5.5
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