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1. Write a letter of request for funding from faculty

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Dear Mr. Nguyen, I am writing this letter on behalf of FELTE Youth Council to respectfully requesting your faculty’s funding consideration of $2000 for our project entitled Wonderland. Your support will allow us to implement the project, thus fostering a sense of wonder for the receiver and bolstering the faculty’s image. Our project aspiration is to help a nine years old girl whose name is Hoang Thi Hien with cancer in Lai Chau, Vietnam. She is currently in hospital in need of surgery; h0wever, owing to the indigence of her family, her surgery may never happen. Besides, if her health recuperates, her ambition of going to school for knowledge acquisition and socialization will be fulfilled. Hence, it would be extremely worthwhile if our project is approved. With the assistance of your faculty, she can definitely undergo the surgery. Therefore, not only will her well- being be revitalized but also, she can commence going to school. Furthermore, the remained funding after her operation will partially alleviate her family condition. In terms of your faculty, your benevolence will accumulate attention from people as well as journalists. This will be an ideal opportunity to advertise your faculty image among students. I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I look forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible and I would like to thank you for your time and consideration in this matter. Yours sincerely, Phuong Minh Quang
Dear Mr. Nguyen,

I am writing this letter on behalf of
FELTE
Youth Council to
respectfully
requesting your faculty’s funding consideration of $2000 for our
project
entitled Wonderland. Your support will
allow
us to implement the
project
,
thus
fostering a sense of wonder for the receiver and bolstering the faculty’s image.

Our
project
aspiration is to
help
a nine years
old
girl whose name is
Hoang
Thi
Hien
with cancer in
Lai
Chau
, Vietnam. She is
currently
in hospital in need of surgery; h0wever, owing to the indigence of her family, her surgery may never happen.
Besides
, if her health recuperates, her ambition of going to school for knowledge acquisition and socialization will
be fulfilled
.
Hence
, it would be
extremely
worthwhile if our
project
is approved
.

With the assistance of your faculty, she can definitely undergo the surgery.
Therefore
, not
only
will her well- being
be
revitalized
but
also
, she can commence going to school.
Furthermore
, the remained funding after her operation will
partially
alleviate her family condition. In terms of your faculty, your benevolence will accumulate attention from
people
as well
as journalists. This will be an ideal opportunity to advertise your faculty image among students.

I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much. I look forward to receiving your reply as
soon
as possible and I would like to thank you for your time and consideration in this matter.

Yours
sincerely
,

Phuong
Minh
Quang
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IELTS letter 1. Write a letter of request for funding from faculty

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
238 words
6.0
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