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ou and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Dear sir/Madam, I am writing this letter about an issue with the furniture of our house in which we are living now. I hope you understand our problem and find a way to help us. I am Mehul Panchal son of laxmanbhai Panchal, who leased your house few months back. we have moved in to your lavish house 15 days back and we loved this place but there is few things i would like to mention about furniture here. When we start placing our item into cupboard and drawers, we saw that there are few bugs in the corner of the drawers and in wardrobe, some doors are not working properly and making sounds. Can you please fix this by sending any person or carpenter who can fix this? and also i need your help in pest control the house by any expert. I hope you come up with some solution. have a great day. Yours faithfully, Mehul Panchal.
Dear sir/Madam,

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house
in which we are living
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now
. I hope you understand our problem and find a way to
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help
us.

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I
am
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Mehul
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Panchal
son of
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laxmanbhai
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Panchal
, who leased your
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house
few months back.
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we
have
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moved
in to your lavish
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house
15 days
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back and
we
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loved
this place
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but
Did you mean "there are few things"?
there is few things
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i
would like to
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mention about furniture
here.

When we
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start
placing our item into cupboard and drawers, we
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saw
that there are few bugs in the corner of the drawers and in wardrobe,
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some
doors are not working
properly
and making sounds.

Can you
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please
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fix
this by sending any person or carpenter who can
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fix
this?
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and
also
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i
need your
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help
in pest control the
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house
by any expert.

I hope you
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come
up with
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some
solution.
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have
a great day.

Yours
faithfully
,

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IELTS letter ou and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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