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You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have hand to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library. In you letter, you should: explaining the situation apologize for the inconvenience called and say what you are going to do

You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have hand to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library. In you letter, you should: explaining the situation apologize for the inconvenience called and say what you are going to do kepmK
Dear Sir, I am Mike Davies, a third year student of English literature. I am a regular borrower of the university library and my library card number is 23874. Anyway, the aim of this letter is to explain why I cannot return the books that I borrowed from your library in time. Five days ago, I borrowed the book named The Cambridge Introduction to T. S. Eliot, which was only allowed for a week. However, I would not be able to return the book within two days because my brother in Birmingham has been admitted to hospital due to heart attack. I am but to go there so that I can take better care of him. You know my brother is all I have. However, I am extremely sorry that I am unable to return the book in due time. Please accept my apology. In addition, I would like to keep the book one week more and earnestly request you not to charge any fine considering the circumstance due to which I am unable to return the book in due time. I hope for your kindness and consideration. Yours Faithfully, Mike Davies.
Dear Sir,

I am Mike Davies, a third year student of English literature. I am a regular borrower of the university library and my library card number is 23874. Anyway, the aim of this letter is to
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that I borrowed from your library in time.

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book
named The Cambridge Introduction to T. S. Eliot, which was
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only
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for a week.
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, I would not be able to
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return
the
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within two days
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because
my brother in Birmingham has
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to heart attack. I am
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but
to go there
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so
that I can take better care of him. You know my brother is all I have.

However
, I am
extremely
sorry that I am unable to
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return
the
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book
in
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due
time.
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Please
accept my apology.
In addition
, I would like to
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keep
the
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book
one week more and
earnestly
request you not to charge any fine considering the circumstance
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due
to which I am unable to
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return
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
due
time.

I hope for your kindness and consideration.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Mike Davies.

IELTS letter You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have hand to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library. In you letter, you should: explaining the situation apologize for the inconvenience called and say what you are going to do

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