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Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter • describe the situation • explain the problems it is causing you • offer at least one solution

Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter • describe the situation • explain the problems it is causing you • offer at least one solution nNYg2

Dear Neighbour, I know we’ve not had the time to chat or hang out lately; it will be nice to bond over a glass of wine and use the avenue to catch up. I noticed your love for rap songs for an artist like Post Malone, Jay-z, to name a few; I’d say great taste in music. Lately, I have been experiencing difficulty sleeping at night; owing to the loud tunes emanating from your apartment. I will appreciate a tone down to the music at night or suggest using headsets to aid my sleep. My inability to get adequate rest affects my performance level at work and hangout times with friends and family; I dose off occasionally. The effect almost cost me my job as I was caught sleeping during my company’s conference meeting. Although, I got a pardon from my boss and promised to ensure that I am well-rested prior to work resumption days. I hope you understand the side-effect of your music jamming at odd hours and would make a substantial adjustment to aid my resting times. I recall that the housing policy does not allow for partying or encouraging loud noise so we (the neighbours / occupants) can hear each other in cases of an emergency. I recommend a reduction to the loud sound or use an earpiece to combat the resonating melody. I don’t think reporting the situation will be the best option, as I believe we are pals. I look forward to your consideration in affirmation and some bonding time over drinks or watching sport together. Best Wishes, Winifred.

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Neighbour
,

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 for rap songs for an artist like Post Malone, Jay-z, to name a few; I’d say great taste in music. Lately, I have been experiencing difficulty sleeping at night; owing to the loud tunes emanating from your apartment. I will appreciate a tone down to the music at night or suggest using headsets to aid my sleep.

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 adequate rest affects my performance level at work and hangout You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
times
 with friends and family; I dose off occasionally
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 a pardon from my boss and promised to ensure that I am well-rested prior to work resumption days.

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make
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. I recall that the housing policy does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
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so
 we (the Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
 / occupants) can hear each other in cases of an emergency.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 recommend a reduction to the loud sound or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 an earpiece to combat the resonating melody. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 don’t This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
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 reporting the situation will be the best option, as I believe we are pals. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to your consideration in affirmation and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 bonding You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 over drinks or watching sport together.

Best Wishes,

Winifred. 