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Write a letter to the Librarian requesting him to extend the date of return of the book, as; you are not in a position to go to the library

Write a letter to the Librarian requesting him to extend the date of return of the book, as; you are not in a position to go to the library gGgKO
Dear Ms. SatyaLingam, I am writing this letter to request you to extend the return date for two books which I have borrowed from the our library on 18th April, I am hoping that you would allow an extension date and save me form paying late fee. I have barrowed book titles as “Computer program fundamentals” and “ Java Edition 14 “. Barrowed books from the card number is #894576. As you know I was supposed to submit the book on Monday but I will not be return on time currently I am in Hyderabad I will to Pulivendula only on Friday, unfortunately, my uncle health condition is not good. Now he is admitted in hospital, since his health condition is not good and her kids in abroad, So i have to be here side until they return. Considering my situation, I am hoping you would permit me to keep the books four more days. Kindly, extend the return date to 21sth April so that I can avoid any fine or penalty for a late submission. Thanks for your time and considerations. Yours Sincerely, Chaitanya
Dear Ms.
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SatyaLingam
,

I am writing this letter to request you to extend the return date for two
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
which I have borrowed from
A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "our library" or "the library"?
the our library
on 18th April, I am hoping that you would
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allow
an extension date and save me form paying late fee.

I have
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barrowed
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book
titles as “Computer program fundamentals” and
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“
Java Edition 14 “.
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Barrowed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
from the card number is #894576. As you know I
was supposed
to submit the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
on Monday
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but
I will not be return on time
currently
I am in Hyderabad I will to
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Pulivendula
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only
on Friday, unfortunately, my uncle health condition is not
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good
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
he
is admitted
in hospital, since his health condition is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and her kids in abroad,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
be here side until they return.

Considering my situation, I am hoping you would permit me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
four more days. Kindly, extend the return date to 21sth April
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that I can avoid any fine or penalty for a late submission.

Thanks for your time and considerations.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Chaitanya

IELTS letter Write a letter to the Librarian requesting him to extend the date of return of the book, as; you are not in a position to go to the library

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184 words
6.0
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