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You have broken your leg, and you have recieved cards and gifts from colleagues.

You have broken your leg, and you have recieved cards and gifts from colleagues. xD1d1
Dear Katya and Ruslan, Thank you so much for the get-well-soon card and the box of candies you sent for me. Ever since I broke my leg, it is the love and affection I am getting from friends like you, which is keeping my spirits up. I have a fracture of the bone. It takes about two month to heal completely and my doctor has advised strict bed rest. So I have a lot of free time. I do my regular study for two or three hours a day and after that I teach some children of the neighbourhood. I find it very interesting as I am being paid for it, and also these children keep me updated with what is going around the city. My physiotherapist comes at 9am and 6pm every day for one hour of exercise session. He guides me very nicely and motivates me to push myself even if I have pain on my foot. With this help I am recovering very fast and I hope to start attending online courses by the end of next month, Once again thanking you for your wishes and the card. Yours truly, Sasha
Dear Katya and
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Ruslan
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Thank you
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much for the
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get
-well-
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soon
card and the box of candies you
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sent
for me. Ever since I broke my leg, it is the
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love
and affection I am getting from friends like you, which is keeping my spirits up.

I have a fracture of the bone. It takes about two
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month
to heal completely and my doctor has advised strict bed rest.
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So
I have
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a lot of
free time. I do my regular study for two or three hours a day and after that I teach
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some
children of the
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neighbourhood
. I find it
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very
interesting as I am
being paid
for it, and
also
these children
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keep
me updated with what is going around the city.

My physiotherapist
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comes
at 9am and 6pm every day for one hour of exercise session. He guides me
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very
nicely
and motivates me to push myself even if I have pain on my foot. With this
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help
I am recovering
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very
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fast
and I hope to
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start
attending online courses by the
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end
of
next
month,

Once again thanking you for your wishes and the card.

Yours
truly
,

Sasha

IELTS letter You have broken your leg, and you have recieved cards and gifts from colleagues.

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193 words
6.0
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