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Feedback to hotel manager for All-day meeting of your company which took place in a local hotel.

Feedback to hotel manager for All-day meeting of your company which took place in a local hotel. OrOPN
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to share our feedback we received from our employees for the all- day meeting held on 12th June 2021 at your Taj Residency property situated in New Jersey. Firstly, your resort is located centrally and it is conveniently connected with all suburbs of the city. Secondly, the property is well maintained and it is ideal for peaceful day activities. Lastly, you have a very well behaved staff blessed with good presence of the mind to handle any unlikely situations. However, I would like to draw your attention to our unpleasant experience related to food, especially the mid-day meal. Vegetarians had very limited options, in fact only one desert was offered to vegan out of 5 deserts. Further, the Barbeque was installed inside the meeting room, which led to conference area filled with smoke after lunch. Also breads counter was too slow leading to excess waiting time on tables. I would suggest you to kindly add more variety for vegetarian deserts in your menu since anyone can enjoy sweets and saviors without egg. Also kindly provide Barbeque setup only to the open areas, as it involves fire risk. Most importantly, please arrange bread preparation facility near to the conference facility to avoid cold breads. I hope you would consider my suggestions constructively. Yours faithfully Hardik Sheth
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to share our feedback we received from our employees for the all- day meeting held on 12th June 2021 at your
Taj
Residency property situated in New Jersey.

Firstly
, your resort
is located
centrally
and it is
conveniently
connected with all suburbs of the city.
Secondly
, the property is well maintained and it is ideal for peaceful day activities.
Lastly
, you have a
very
well behaved
staff blessed with
good
presence of the mind to handle any unlikely situations.

However
, I would like to draw your attention to our unpleasant experience related to food,
especially
the mid-day meal. Vegetarians had
very
limited options, in fact
only
one desert
was offered
to vegan out of 5 deserts.
Further
, the
Barbeque
was installed
inside the meeting room, which led to conference area filled with smoke after lunch.
Also
breads counter was too slow leading to excess waiting time on tables.

I would suggest you to kindly
add
more variety for vegetarian
deserts
in your menu since anyone can enjoy sweets and saviors without egg.
Also
kindly provide
Barbeque
setup
only
to the open areas, as it involves fire
risk
. Most
importantly
,
please
arrange bread preparation facility near to the conference facility to avoid
cold
breads.

I hope you would consider my suggestions
constructively
.

Yours
faithfully


Hardik
Sheth
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IELTS letter Feedback to hotel manager for All-day meeting of your company which took place in a local hotel.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
223 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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