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Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter • explain your situation • say why you feel unsure about living in the city • ask some questions about life in the city

Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter • explain your situation • say why you feel unsure about living in the city • ask some questions about life in the city xDW0b
How are you faring? I am writing to inform you of my job offer in Alberta, Canada, and to inquire about the living condition in the Province since you live there. This information will aid my decision-making process and guide my relocation plans. I have never visited Alberta and was wondering if the city is well suited for my person. As you know, I don’t do well with crowds and harsh weather conditions; what is the Weather like over there in Alberta? What is the African community like, and how convenient can one purchase African foodstuffs? I am highly interested in working with Imperial Oil, but with my little research on the Province, I am unsure if I will adapt to the environment and its culture. Also, I learned that the housing rate in the city is quite expensive. What is the average monthly rent cost for a bedroom apartment? I often reminisce about when we visited those places and parks in Saskatchewan and how welcoming our neighbors were despite our cultural differences. I hope living in Alberta will be as close to home as Saskatchewan. I will love to hear your views regarding my questions and am looking forward to spending time with you once I have my decision made. Warm Regards Winifred
How are you faring? I am writing to inform you of my job offer in Alberta, Canada, and to inquire about the living condition in the Province since you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
there. This information will aid my decision-making process and guide my relocation plans.

I have never visited Alberta and was wondering if the city is well suited for my person. As you know, I don’t do well with crowds and harsh weather conditions; what is the Weather like over there in Alberta? What is the African community like, and how convenient can one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
African foodstuffs?

I am
highly
interested in working with Imperial Oil,
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but
with my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
research on the Province, I am unsure if I will adapt to the environment and its culture.
Also
, I learned that the housing rate in the city is quite expensive. What is the average monthly rent cost for a bedroom apartment? I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
reminisce about when we visited those places and parks in Saskatchewan and how welcoming our neighbors were despite our cultural differences. I hope living in Alberta will be as close to home as Saskatchewan.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will
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love
to hear your views regarding my questions and
Did you mean "am I"?
am
looking forward to spending time with you once I have my decision made.

Warm Regards

Winifred
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter • explain your situation • say why you feel unsure about living in the city • ask some questions about life in the city

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
213 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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