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Write a letter to your friends. In your letter • thank your friends for letting you stay with them • describe some things you enjoyed about your vacation • invite your friends to visit you

Write a letter to your friends. In your letter • thank your friends for letting you stay with them • describe some things you enjoyed about your vacation • invite your friends to visit you 9rXjr
Dear Pragya, How are you and the rest of your folks faring back in India? I want to commend your effort in ensuring that my visit to the Taj Mahal was memorable and exciting. I had the best time of my life; I truly enjoyed every bit of the experience from the road trip to the palatable cuisines and restaurants, as well as meeting your family. I’ll jump at this again in a heartbeat if the opportunity presents itself. I have a lot to share with my friends’ back home in Nigeria. I hope the photographs will do justice to how beautiful the Taj is. Despite the challenges I faced while making my hotel bookings, coupled with the loss of my credit card, you came in and saved the day. Praggy, I sincerely appreciate your hospitality and letting me stay in your family home; I’m immensely grateful. Upon my arrival at the Lagos Airport, I was received by friends. They all couldn’t wait for me to share the experience and see photos of the Taj. I told them of the wife’s tomb and the gemstones & precious ornament that were infused into the architectural design of the buildings. I also made little emphasis on how white the buildings were and also how the sun cast a shadow on the tomb. They were all excited and in a frenzy mode, itching to hear and see more of the Taj. Their curiosity landed them on Wikipedia, reading stories of the Persian wife and her love for her husband. The story kept them in anticipation of their visit to the Taj. I hope it won’t be too much work and planning to invite my friends for a visit? I hope not. My visit to the Taj and the tale it holds left me mesmerized; experiencing the culture and meeting your family was a pleasure. I look forward to another vacation time with my friends over here in Nigeria. Your Loving Friend Winnie.
Dear
Pragya
,

How are you and the rest of your folks faring back in India? I want to commend your effort in ensuring that my
visit
to the Taj Mahal was memorable and exciting. I had the best time of my life; I
truly
enjoyed every bit of the experience from the road trip to the palatable cuisines and restaurants,
as well
as meeting your family.
I
’ll jump at this again in a heartbeat if the opportunity presents itself.

I
have a lot to share with my
friends’
back home in Nigeria.
I
hope the photographs will do justice to how
beautiful
the
Taj
is. Despite the challenges I faced while making my hotel bookings, coupled with the loss of my credit card, you came in and saved the day.
Praggy
, I
sincerely
appreciate your hospitality and letting me stay in your family home; I’m
immensely
grateful.

Upon my arrival at the Lagos Airport, I
was received
by
friends
. They all couldn’t wait for me to share the experience and
see
photos of the
Taj
. I
told
them of the wife’s tomb and the gemstones & precious ornament that
were infused
into the architectural design of the buildings. I
also
made
little
emphasis on how white the buildings were and
also
how the sun cast a shadow on the tomb. They were all excited and in a frenzy mode, itching to hear and
see
more of the
Taj
. Their curiosity landed them on Wikipedia, reading stories of the Persian wife and her
love
for her husband. The story
kept
them in anticipation of their
visit
to the
Taj
.

I hope it won’t be too much work and planning to invite my
friends
for a
visit
? I hope not.

My
visit
to the
Taj
and the tale it holds
left
me mesmerized; experiencing the culture and meeting your family was a pleasure. I look forward to another vacation time with my
friends
over here in Nigeria.

Your Loving Friend

Winnie.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friends. In your letter • thank your friends for letting you stay with them • describe some things you enjoyed about your vacation • invite your friends to visit you

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  American English
7 paragraphs
329 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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