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Dear Joy, I’m writing this mail to you to get to know about you as a pen friend. Mrs. Damayanthi gave me your address to me since I was looking for a pen friend for quite some time. First, I would tell you about my self so you can know about me very well. Hope you have atleast one in common. I’m 35 years old and currently working as an accountant in a Construction Company. I heard that you are a Musician which is one of my interested area. I usually listen to English and Sinhala songs, specially fond of 80s and 90s songs. I know I’m a bit old is gold type of person. Apart from music I really like to travel and explore different part of the country even different countries. Whenever I got free time or a long weekend I used to plan a trip with my best buddies and travel. I like eating different types of foods, and get to know people. Specially hot and spicy food. So hope you now know something about me and I also very much eager to know about yourself and your interests. Waiting for a reply soon. All the best. Best Regards, Mahesh Perera
Dear Joy,

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pen friend
. Mrs.
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Damayanthi
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address to me since I was looking for a
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pen friend
for quite
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self
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about me
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well. Hope you have
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atleast
one in common.

I’m 35 years
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and
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working as an accountant in a Construction
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. I heard that you are

a Musician which is one of my interested area.
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I
usually
listen to English and
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of 80s and 90s songs.
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is gold type of person. Apart from music I
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like to travel

and explore
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part of the country even
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countries. Whenever I
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free time or a long

weekend I
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to plan a trip with my best buddies and travel. I like eating
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different
types of foods, and

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know
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people
.
Specially
hot and spicy food.

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hope you
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now
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something about me and I
also
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much eager to
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know
about yourself and

your interests. Waiting for a reply
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. All the best.

Best Regards,

Mahesh
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Perera
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IELTS letter Your English teacher has found new penfriend for you

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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