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Dear sir, Greetings from the Toshiba team.

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Dear sir, Greetings from the Toshiba team. With your discussion held a week before with our service personnel Mr. Rajbir. He tried several times to get an appointment for addressing the issues mentioned. We are waiting for confirmation from your end. Please give us a suitable timing to address the issue otherwise we shall close the Complaint ticket raised by you. Dear sir, Greetings from the Toshiba team. With your discussion held a week before with our service personnel Mr. Rajbir. He tried several times to get an appointment for addressing the issues mentioned. We are waiting for confirmation from your end. Please give us a suitable timing to address the issue otherwise we shall close the Complaint ticket raised by you. Dear sir, Greetings from the Toshiba team. With your discussion held a week before with our service personnel Mr. Rajbir. He tried several times to get an appointment for addressing the issues mentioned. We are waiting for confirmation from your end. Please give us a suitable timing to address the issue otherwise we shall close the Complaint ticket raised by you.
Dear sir,

Greetings from the Toshiba team.

With your discussion held a week
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
with our service personnel Mr.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Rajbir
.

He tried several times to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an appointment for addressing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
mentioned.

We are waiting for confirmation from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
give us a suitable timing to address the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issue
otherwise
we shall close the Complaint ticket raised by you.

Dear sir,

Greetings from the Toshiba team.

With your discussion held a week
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
with our service personnel Mr.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Rajbir
.

He tried several times to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an appointment for addressing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
mentioned.

We are waiting for confirmation from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
give us a suitable timing to address the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issue
otherwise
we shall close the Complaint ticket raised by you.

Dear sir,

Greetings from the Toshiba team.

With your discussion held a week
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
with our service personnel Mr.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Rajbir
.

He tried several times to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an appointment for addressing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issues
mentioned.

We are waiting for confirmation from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
give us a suitable timing to address the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
issue
otherwise
we shall close the Complaint ticket raised by you.
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IELTS letter Dear sir, Greetings from the Toshiba team.

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18 paragraphs
183 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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