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You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for a teaching job. Write a letter to the headmaster of the school, applying for the job.

You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for a teaching job. Write a letter to the headmaster of the school, applying for the job. oVedq

You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for a teaching job. Write a letter to the headmaster of the school, applying for the job. Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the teaching job, which you advertised in the local newspaper. I am 24 years old. I was awarded BA by the pedagogical institute named after Ajiniyaz in 2016. Morever I have diplomas for my succesful work and certificate which is mentioned IELTS. After I have finished pedagogical institute, I started working at school 15 as an English teacher for 2 years. Also I finished psychological course, so I am really easy-going with teenagers. I consider myself I am experienced teacher. The school, which I have been working is extremely good. But I need more salary. Because my work is very demanding. I love my work with its all difficulties. I will be available for the interview at weekends. I would be greatful if you would consider application. I look forward to hearing you. Your faithfully, Dilara Salieva.

You have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 an advertisement in the local newspaper for a teaching job. Write a letter to the headmaster of the school, applying for the job.

Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the teaching job, which you advertised in the local newspaper.

I am 24 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
.

I was awarded
 BA by the pedagogical institute named after Possible spelling mistake found.
Ajiniyaz
 in 2016.

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Morever
 I have diplomas for my Possible spelling mistake found.successful
succesful
 work and certificate which is mentioned
 IELTS.

After I have finished pedagogical institute, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 working at school 15 as an English teacher for 2 years.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 I finished psychological course, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am really
 easy-going with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
.

I consider myself I am experienced
 teacher. The school, which I have been working is extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I need more salary. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 my work is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 demanding.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 my work with its all difficulties.

I will be available for the interview at weekends.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would be Possible spelling mistake found.gratefuldreadfulrestfulfretful
greatful
 if you would consider application. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing you. Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
, Possible spelling mistake found.DiaryClaraDianaHilaryLaraDinar
Dilara
Possible spelling mistake found.Saliva
Salieva
. 