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Last month you entered a competition and won the first prize, which was a visit to a city of your choice for a weekend. You have now returned, and decide to write a letter to a friend about the visit.

Last month you entered a competition and won the first prize, which was a visit to a city of your choice for a weekend. You have now returned, and decide to write a letter to a friend about the visit. OgNrG
Dear Maisha, How are you doing? I am doing great! I hope you remember that last month I won the first prize in a competition. I can travel to any city of my choice for a weekend. Although it was a small trip, I want to share my experience with you! I chose to visit Paris, France, because I have heard it is a beautiful and cultural city and one of my friends, Amy, lives there. It felt amazing to meet Amy again. She helped me a lot throughout the trip. Without her, it would be impossible for me to tour Paris. We had visited many places. We went to the Lourve Museum, Rodin Museum, Palace of Versailles, some monuments, and of course the famous Eiffel Tower. We also ate various comfort foods. One of my favorite foods is Pot-au-feu. It is a perfect delicacy! We both had a lot of fun and enjoyment. I got to learn many histories behind such interesting monuments. The place was extremely captivating. Overall, I had a wonderful trip. Offer my regards to your parents. Reply soon! Love, Tanzila
Dear
Maisha
,

How are you doing? I am doing great! I hope you remember that last month I won the
first
prize in a competition.
I
can travel to any city of my choice for a weekend. Although it was a
small
trip, I want to share my experience with you!

I chose to visit Paris, France,
because
I have heard it is a
beautiful
and cultural city and one of my friends, Amy,
lives
there. It felt amazing to
meet
Amy again. She
helped
me a lot throughout the trip. Without her, it would be impossible for me to tour Paris. We had visited
many
places. We went to the
Lourve
Museum, Rodin Museum, Palace of Versailles,
some
monuments, and
of course
the
famous
Eiffel Tower.
We
also
ate various comfort foods. One of my favorite foods is
Pot-au-feu
. It is a perfect delicacy! We both had
a lot of
fun and enjoyment. I
got
to learn
many
histories behind such interesting monuments. The place was
extremely
captivating.
Overall
, I had a wonderful trip.

Offer my regards to your parents. Reply
soon
!

Love
,

Tanzila
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IELTS letter Last month you entered a competition and won the first prize, which was a visit to a city of your choice for a weekend. You have now returned, and decide to write a letter to a friend about the visit.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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