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You have seen an advertisement in the hotel write a letter to the manager of a company

You have seen an advertisement in the hotel write a letter to the manager of a company Q8jXX

Dear Sir or Madam, I should like to apply for the position of a receptionist mentioned in your advertisement in Great Times newspaper of June15, on Friday. My name is Sara Smith and I am 25 years old. I graduated the University of Tourism and Management and I have been working as a receptionist for two years in Green World hotel. I am curious about English, can speak fluently and communicate with any foreigner. In addition, I have been teaching graduate students in my courses for three years. On April, I got an International certificate of IELTS, band score 8. My reason for leaving my present employment is simply that I had to move in a new flat. I find challenging to go to work on the road because of congesting traffic. It takes me much time. As regard salary, I leave it to you to decide after experience of my capacity. I would certainly be interested in hearing from you soon and wish to have an appointment for an interview. For your convenience I enclose my resumes. I look forward to hearing from you happy news. Best regards, Miss Sara Smith

Dear Sir or Madam,

I should like to apply for the position of a receptionist mentioned in your advertisement in Great Times newspaper of June15, on Friday.

My name is Sara Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Smith, and
Smith and
 I am 25 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. I The verb 'to graduate' requires the preposition 'from': "graduated from".graduated from
graduated
 the University of Tourism and Management and I have been working as a receptionist for two years in Green World hotel. I am curious about English, can speak fluently
 and communicate with any foreigner. In addition
, I have been teaching graduate students in my courses for three years. On April, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 an International certificate of IELTS, band score 8. My reason for leaving my present employment is simply
 that I had to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 in a new flat. I find challenging Did you mean "going"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.going
to go
 to work on the road This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of congesting traffic. It takes me much time.

As regard salary, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 it to you to decide after experience of my capacity.

I would certainly
be interested
 in hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 and wish to have an appointment for an interview. For your convenience I enclose my resumes.

I look forward to hearing from you happy news.

Best regards,

Miss Sara Smith