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You have been on holiday abroad for a week.Write a letter to your holiday so far.

You have been on holiday abroad for a week. Write a letter to your holiday so far. nVlAK
Dear Dad and Mum Good morning! How are you? I hope you are very well. I have got so much to tell you that I don't know where to begin. Visiting London is fantastic so far. The weather is fresh and people are hospitable and they keep their house very clean. The accent of people there is nice and melodic. I stayed in a hotel name, , Five stars hotel" the servise was good and price was reasonable. The city is very famous for it's handcrafts. In additional, the city attracts the largest number of tourists in London. I have never seen anywhere like it before As soon as I will come back and tell you all about it. Yours Makhliyo.
Dear Dad and Mum

Good
morning! How are you? I hope you are
very
well. I have
got
so
much to
tell
you that I don't know where to
begin
. Visiting London is fantastic
so
far. The weather is fresh and
people
are
hospitable and
they
keep
their
house
very
clean. The accent of
people
there is nice and melodic. I stayed in a hotel name,
,
Five stars hotel
"
the
servise
was
good
and price was reasonable. The city is
very
famous
for it's handcrafts
. In additional, the city attracts the largest number of tourists in London.

I have never
seen
anywhere like it
before


As
soon
as I will
come
back and
tell
you all about it.

Yours

Makhliyo
.
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He who knows no foreign languages knows nothing of his own.
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IELTS letter You have been on holiday abroad for a week. Write a letter to your holiday so far.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
121 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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