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talk about your day and what you have learned

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Hey there, nowadays I wait impatiently the news, not political ones. However, I do not know how is going to be in the future. Day by day, I am still learning more and more due to the new experience that I get from the events that I live. I have learned more about travelling. One thing I have learned is that, you ought to insist every time to get your aims, because some people claim that; if you have told us, we would have helped you. In other words, they want to not sustain their faults’ consequences.
Hey there, nowadays I wait
impatiently
the news, not political ones.
However
, I do not know how is going to be in the future. Day by day, I am
still
learning more and more due to the new experience that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
events
that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
. I have learned more about travelling. One thing I have learned is that, you ought to insist every time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
your aims,
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because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
claim that; if you have
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told
us, we would have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
you.
In other words
, they want to not sustain their faults’ consequences.
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IELTS letter talk about your day and what you have learned

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  American English
1 paragraphs
97 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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