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Task 1 Writing General Training

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope this letter finds in the best of your health. I am writing this letter to request a different location for my accommodation. I am an international student here at the college and currently enrolled in the Masters of Business Administration program. As you know I am sharing a room with another person. My room-mate has a very extroverted personality and he always has someone invited over. They turn on music very loud and have parties all night due to that it is very hard for me to concentrate on my studies. He owns a cat which is not only against the college accommodation rules but also triggers an allergic reaction in my body. This is why I would be very grateful If I have another room next term. It would be most convenient for me not having to share my room with someone else. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Richard Hoffman

Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter finds in the best of your health. I am writing this letter to request a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 location for my accommodation.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am an international student here at the college and currently
 enrolled in the Masters of Business Administration program. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you know I am sharing a room with another person. My room-mate has a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 extroverted Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).personality, and
personality and
 he always has someone invited over. They turn on music This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 loud and have parties all night due to that it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 for me to concentrate on my studies. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possesses
owns
 a cat which is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 against the college accommodation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 triggers an allergic reaction in my body. This is why I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful If I have another room next
 term. It would be most convenient for me not having to share my room with someone else.

I am looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Richard Hoffman