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write a letter to college officer describe problems to share room with other girl

write a letter to college officer describe problems to share room with other girl 5A7oe

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to say that my name is Prabhdeep Kaur and i am sharing a room with my other collegemate and i feel it is very difficult for me to study even my exam is near and i never prepare for exam. The first thing is that the other girl who lives with me bother all time and she is talking all time on mobile phone in a loud voice. Even, when i am trying to study but she sings song. I tried to understand her but she never co-operate with me. The second thing is that she never keep things in a right place and in a organize way so, i do not like mess. The third thing is that behaviour of that girl is not good and she makes oversmart all time. In the last, i want to say that through these difficulties, i cannot share room with others. So, i want private accommodatation and i will be prepare for my exam. I can pay much for this. Hopefully thanks and hearing you soon. Your sincerely, Prabhdeep kaur

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to say that my name is Possible spelling mistake found.Pradeep
Prabhdeep
Possible spelling mistake found.AUR
Kaur
 and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am sharing a room with my other Possible spelling mistake found.college mate
collegemate
 and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 feel it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 difficult for me to study even my exam is near and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 never prepare for exam.

The first
 thing is that the other girl who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 with me bother all Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).time, and
time and
 she is talking all time on mobile phone in a loud voice. Even, when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 am trying to study This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she sings song. I tried to understand her This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she never The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "co-operates", "".co-operatesapply
co-operate
 with me. The second thing is that she never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 things in a right place and in Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 organize way This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 do not like mess. The third thing is that Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
 of that girl is not Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).good, and
good and
 she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
Possible spelling mistake found.over smartovers mart
oversmart
 all time.

In the last, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to say that through these difficulties, Did you mean "I"?I
i
 cannot share room with others. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want private Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accommodatation
 and Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will be Consider using the past participle "prepared"?prepared
prepare
 for my exam. I can pay much for this.

Hopefully
 thanks and hearing you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Pradeep
Prabhdeep
Possible spelling mistake found.AUR
kaur