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You are unhappy with the road quality nearby your home. Write a letter to complain about the same to City Council. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe the situation • say what you want the officer to do for you

You are unhappy with the road quality nearby your home. Write a letter to complain about the same to City Council. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe the situation • say what you want the officer to do for you KWpYk
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Smith, and I reside in L 10, Green Apartment near North avenue road, Toronto. I have been staying for the past eight years. I am writing this letter to show my disappointment regarding the road quality near my home. Let me elaborate on the situation. In our locality, the roads have not been repaired for the last four years. The road that starts from my society until the main road is full of bumpy drives is called the Linking Road. Moreover, it has developed many holes, and now the monsoon has started and made the situation even worse. On the contrary, many people get injured and have accidents due to worn-out roads. Considering the gravity of the matter, I would request you to take action immediately and start the re-construction work of this roadway. I solicit your cooperation on this issue. My coordinate is (555) 986544, and my email is smith@msn. com. Yours Faithfully, Smith.
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Smith, and I reside in L 10, Green Apartment near North avenue
road
, Toronto. I have been staying for the past eight years. I am writing this letter to
show
my disappointment regarding the
road
quality near my home.

Let
me elaborate on the situation. In our locality, the
roads
have not
been repaired
for the last four years. The
road
that
starts
from my society until the main
road
is full of bumpy drives
is called
the Linking
Road
.
Moreover
, it has developed
many
holes, and
now
the monsoon has
started
and made the situation even worse.
On the contrary
,
many
people
get
injured and have accidents due to worn-out roads.

Considering the gravity of the matter, I would request you to take action immediately and
start
the re-construction work of this roadway.

I solicit your cooperation on this issue. My coordinate is (555) 986544, and my email is
smith@msn
.
com
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Smith.
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IELTS letter You are unhappy with the road quality nearby your home. Write a letter to complain about the same to City Council. In your letter • introduce yourself • describe the situation • say what you want the officer to do for you

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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