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The extract below is part of letter you received recently from a friend. Write a reply giving her some advice about what she should do

The extract below is part of letter you received recently from a friend. Write a reply giving her some advice about what she should do Pr3wX

I just got your letter and I think I can help you about your problem which is how to get degree. I was sorry to hear that you're feeling depressed. I am sure your problem isn't as serious as you say it. The best advice I can give you to pass the exams and get degree. First of all you shouldn't feel like such a failure. Second of all you must believe to pass the exams perfectly and can get into university. Third of all you never stop learning to achieve your goals. If I were you, I would go to any course for studying very well. The most important thing to remember is to plenty of book and extra information on internet. Why don't you go to learning centre? I know how much you love learning. Also every day you should watch programs belong to education on TV. If you follow my advice, I am sure you will obtain your purpose. Best wishes Makhliyo

I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 your letter and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you about your problem which is how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 degree.

I was sorry to hear that you're feeling depressed. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am sure your problem isn't as serious as you say it.

The best advice I can give you to pass the exams and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 degree. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
 you shouldn't feel like such a failure. Second of all you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 believe to pass the exams perfectly
 and can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 into university. Third of all you never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 learning to achieve your goals. If I were you, I would go to any course for studying This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. The most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing to remember is Did you mean "too"?too
to
Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: "plenty of books".plenty of books
plenty of book
 and extra information on internet.

Why don't you go to learning Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
? I know how much you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 learning. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 every day you should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 programs belong to education on TV. If you follow my advice, I am sure you will obtain your purpose.

Best wishes

Possible spelling mistake found.
Makhliyo