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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

Dear Sir, I am writing this in regard to the job opportunity at the City Museum Shop during the summer break. My name is Manik Tandon and I am currently pursuing the final year of my graduation in Computer Science and Engineering. First of all, I would like to inform you that I am very patient and calm person which I firmly believe is very important to handle the antique pieces in the museum. Subsequently, I like to keep things in an organized form which will make the visitors feel that the museum is well maintained and well kept. As visiting the historic places and collecting antique pieces has always been my passion which got me attracted towards this job. Working here will provide me the sense of satisfaction and belongingness. Moreover, I would be able to guide the visitors in a better way as I am living in this city from the last 20 years and hence I know many things about this city. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Manik Tandon
Dear Sir,

I am writing this in regard to the job opportunity at the City Museum Shop during the summer break. My name is
Manik
Tandon and
I am
currently
pursuing the final year of my graduation in Computer Science and Engineering.

First of all
, I would like to inform you that I am
very
patient and calm person which I
firmly
believe is
very
important
to handle the antique pieces in the museum.
Subsequently
, I like to
keep
things in an organized form which will
make
the visitors feel that the museum is well maintained and well
kept
.

As visiting the historic places and collecting antique pieces has always been my passion which
got
me attracted towards this job. Working here will provide me the sense of satisfaction and belongingness.
Moreover
, I would be able to guide the visitors in a better way as I am living in this city from the last 20 years and
hence
I know
many
things about this city.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Manik
Tandon
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have explain why you are interested in the job

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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