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You are attending a night course in the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. In your letter, you should tell:  what course you are studying  what things you are not happy about  what you expect from the school director

Dear Mr, ShahI am writing this letter to provide feedback on one of the night-course on Machine Learning, that had started from last month in our institute. My name is Amy, and I am a student of Bachelor of computer science and I enrolled for the night course to gain more knowledge in this field which would be helpful to me in upcoming placements. This is an incredible opportunity for me and other students to learn about various methods of implementing automatic tools. But unfortunately, I faced some problems regarding teaching methods as well as the attitude of the teacher for answering any questions of us. The teacher who teaches us does not provide a clear understanding of the topic. Moreover, the temperature of the Air Conditioning system falls automatically every day and we all feel suffocated in the lecture. It is a humble request to you to work on our situation, all students can grasp knowledge and make this time fruitful. Please ask the teacher to change the teaching procedure so that all of us can easily understand as well as try to fix the temperature of A. C so we would feel fresh. I will be very thankful to you for these generous efforts. Hope to hear you soon. Amy
Dear Mr,
ShahI
am
writing this letter to provide feedback on one of the night-course on Machine Learning, that had
started
from last month in our institute.

My name is Amy, and I am a student of Bachelor of computer science and I enrolled for the night course to gain more knowledge in this field which would be helpful to me in upcoming placements. This is an incredible opportunity for me and other students to learn about various methods of implementing automatic tools.
But
unfortunately, I faced
some
problems regarding teaching methods
as well
as the attitude of the teacher for answering any questions of us. The teacher who teaches us does not provide a
clear
understanding of the topic.
Moreover
, the temperature of the Air Conditioning system falls
automatically
every
day and
we all feel suffocated in the lecture.

It is a humble request to you to work on our situation, all students can grasp knowledge and
make
this time fruitful.
Please
ask the teacher to
change
the teaching procedure
so
that all of us can
easily
understand
as well
as try to
fix
the temperature of A. C
so
we would feel fresh.

I will be
very
thankful to you for these generous efforts.

Hope to hear you
soon
.

Amy
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IELTS letter You are attending a night course in the school. You are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this. In your letter, you should tell:  what course you are studying  what things you are not happy about  what you expect from the school director

Letter
  American English
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211 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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