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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to take time off work give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Dear Sanjay, I am writing to you for informing that I am planning to attend world's largest technical conference, that is going to held in New York city in United State of America. So, I need some leaves for the same. I was planning to attend this conference from last couple of years but earlier due to visa issue I was not able to make it. As you know I got my USA visa last month, so I am excited to join this event as it will be my first abroad trip. Duration of this conference is three days and it will be in other country so I have to take a long flight. Besides it, I have to do a lot of shopping for winter cloths due to colder weather therefore I would need one week leave from 02nd February to 09 February. In my absence i will make sure that there will be no impact. I already assigned all upcoming to do tasks to my project colleague as he is part of project from since a long time. On the other hand, I also gave him required training, support team details so there will be no impact of my absence. I would appreciate if you can allow me to attend this conference. I am eagerly waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, Pritam Shekhawat

Dear Sanjay,

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conference
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allow
 me to attend this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforumdiscussionconsultationseminarinterviewsymposium
conference
. I am eagerly
 waiting for your response.

Yours faithfully
,

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