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One of your friend is recently gave interview for a new job. Write a letter to your friend giving him some advice about the interview. In your letter you should write: • Ask some questions about the job. • Give him some advice about the interview. • Ask him when and where you could meet him before his interview to give him some tips.

Dear Amir, How are you? Thank you so much for your letter and your thoughtful gift. I realised that you are preparing for your dream job interview and would like to help you achieve this goal. First of all, tell me when do you have this interview? I had a peek at their career website and found a few similar roles. Also, You should know a few things at the interview; the first impression is the key, and always smile with a firm handshake. Always answer clearly and concisely as the interviewer will greatly appreciate that. The best guideline to follow is to look into five S's of speech. I want to meet you in person and practice the interview to have a clear idea and feel less nervous at the real interview. I can meet you at the park next to the Plaza at 4. 30 pm on the day before the interview, and we could practice several scenarios. I look forward to your reply. Let me know if the above suggested time works and looking forward to your reply soon. Best wishes, Viraj

Dear Amir,

How are you? Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much for your letter and your thoughtful gift. I Possible spelling mistake. ‘realised’ is British English.realized
realised
 that you are preparing for your dream job You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconferenceaccountpress conferencedialoguehearingconversation
interview
 and would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you achieve this goal.

Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me when do you have this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconferenceaccountpress conferencedialoguehearingconversation
interview
? I had a peek at their career website and found a few similar roles. Also
,

You should know a few things at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconferenceaccountpress conferencedialoguehearingconversation
interview
; the first
 impression is the key, and always smile with a firm handshake. Always answer clearly
 and concisely
 as the interviewer will greatly
 appreciate that. The best guideline to follow is to look into five S's of speech.

I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you in person and practice the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconferenceaccountpress conferencedialoguehearingconversation
interview
 to have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
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idea
 and feel less nervous at the real You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconferenceaccountpress conferencedialoguehearingconversation
interview
. I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you at the park next
 to the Plaza at 4. 30 pm on the day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconferenceaccountpress conferencedialoguehearingconversation
interview
, and we could practice several scenarios. I look forward to your reply.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me know if the above suggested time works and looking forward to your reply This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best wishes,

Possible spelling mistake found.Viral
Viraj