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One of your friend is recently gave interview for a new job. Write a letter to your friend giving him some advice about the interview. In your letter you should write: • Ask some questions about the job. • Give him some advice about the interview. • Ask him when and where you could meet him before his interview to give him some tips.

Dear Amir, How are you? Thank you so much for your letter and your thoughtful gift. I realised that you are preparing for your dream job interview and would like to help you achieve this goal. First of all, tell me when do you have this interview? I had a peek at their career website and found a few similar roles. Also, You should know a few things at the interview; the first impression is the key, and always smile with a firm handshake. Always answer clearly and concisely as the interviewer will greatly appreciate that. The best guideline to follow is to look into five S's of speech. I want to meet you in person and practice the interview to have a clear idea and feel less nervous at the real interview. I can meet you at the park next to the Plaza at 4. 30 pm on the day before the interview, and we could practice several scenarios. I look forward to your reply. Let me know if the above suggested time works and looking forward to your reply soon. Best wishes, Viraj
Dear Amir,

How are you? Thank you
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so
much for your letter and your thoughtful gift. I
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realised
that you are preparing for your dream job
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interview
and would like to
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help
you achieve this goal.

Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.
First of all
,
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tell
me when do you have this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
? I had a peek at their career website and found a few similar roles.
Also
,

You should know a few things at the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
; the
first
impression is the key, and always smile with a firm handshake. Always answer
clearly
and
concisely
as the interviewer will
greatly
appreciate that. The best guideline to follow is to look into five S's of speech.

I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you in person and practice the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
to have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
and feel less nervous at the real
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
. I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you at the park
next
to the Plaza at 4. 30 pm on the day
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
, and we could practice several scenarios. I look forward to your reply.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know if the above suggested time works and looking forward to your reply
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Best wishes,

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Viraj
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IELTS letter One of your friend is recently gave interview for a new job. Write a letter to your friend giving him some advice about the interview. In your letter you should write: • Ask some questions about the job. • Give him some advice about the interview. • Ask him when and where you could meet him before his interview to give him some tips.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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